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it was a fun read. it may not be a perfect story but it is a good story overall.
i'm still early into the book but this is honestly one of the greatest if not the greatest fan fic i've ever read . 2 OF MY FAVOURITE NOVEL MCS IN ONE BOOK AND DONE RIGHT . honestly PEAK‼️. i wish the author didnt drop it 😔
Hey, you forgot to put your story in "completed", you put "Completed" in the title, but not in the story so it won't appear next to the other completed stories.
Would it be possible to translate your novel into Thai? I will make sure to give credit and refrain from using it commercially. Please reply if you see it. ❤️
ADD THE LIGHT FRAGMENTS AND THE OTHER MONARCHS AND HAVE A WORLD BATTLE PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZzzzzzzzz!;!;$:$:$:!:!.$.$:!:!:$;$;$$:$:!.37
Esta buena esta novela, pero tambien si no has tenido ideas o ya te cansaste de escribir, no lo se, pero te quisiera dar esta idea. He visto que todos los fanfic de TBATE se centran mucho en personajes principales o secundarios, pero ¿Por que no hacer uno de haber nacido hermano?, de sylvie osea hermano gemelo de Sylvie pero que sea abandonado o que directamente el huyera de Arthur cuando tomo a sylvie
my favourite "beginning of the end" novelI love it reading it the third time and posting the review now 😞😞😞 forgot
Fantastic. It’s absolutely the best fan-fic I’ve ever read. I simply love it :)
This book was amazing I couldn’ put it down when I picked it up the develope was amazing the fights I felt my heart clench the ending was amazing it was what I was needing as everyone that is normal knows solo levelings ending left much to be desired this fufullied it thank you
I am not a novel reader soo i didnt know what the heck was going around in the later chapters..Still Great fanfic ------------------------------------------------------------------
At first I was hesitant because it wasn't a loser who reincarnated but a very serious character in my view.... I couldn't find any intresting fanfics so I just read few chapters... It was surprising good, it became one my favorites along with the other novel where we have Wanda and his brother as couples and mainlead
Thanks for writing this piece of art, it fully delivered the hype I expected from the crossover between Solo Leveling and The Beginning After The End. You didn't make some weird additions, it was just things from both stories merged in the purest forms possible. I loved it!
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>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> YOU ARE DEAD DEAD DEAD MUHAHAHAHAHAHA
My Best Friendo! ...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Epic................ ....... ................ ....... ................ ....... ................ ....... ................ ....... ................ ....... ................ ....... .....
bro why stop writing such a great FF you monster 😭. .. .. .. .. . . . . . . . . . . .. .. ,'*discuss the same thing to say that the same 43 🧚🏻♀️💫🥰💞 👁👄👁 👁👄👁 👁👄👁 You don't have this emoji😅⃤ But I do 💜⃤😂⃞:😅⃤😂⃞ with @FacemojiKeyboard You don't have this emoji😅⃤ But I do 💜⃤😂⃞:😅⃤😂⃞ with @FacemojiKeyboard You don't have this emoji😅⃤ But I do 💜⃤😂⃞:😅⃤😂⃞ with @FacemojiKeyboard
how did i not find this on wn when i searched solo leveling. absolute banger. arthur also gonna bang the elf girl ;) i need word count wn just let me post the review
Excellent chapters, I read each and every one of them [img=recommend] I wait for the next part, for now I wonder who will be the couple Ashborn.
i forgot to rate again but its super good ..................................................................ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo..................................................................
Im curious, will enjoy the novel without reading the original? ………………………,,…………………………………………………………………………………………………,,…………………………………………………………………………
It's a well-done ff the truth, you introduce systems of other verses into this one so that they can flow without damaging the story, but Ashborn you made him very apathetic, he's Human give him a little feelings and his power scale intervened too much in everything, he looks like a manhwa character haha But in general my criticism is towards the development of the character there is no love or anything of that are well the fights and everything but no mames leads a whole existence fighting, give it more romanticism.
I loved, you can read this fanfic while you wait for the chapters of the novel and I loved it a little less than the original but it's very good
Rights and the following the following information and other than that it has pictures for more than that you are the first to be able to make the same as well in this is the following the same thing you have a new window is
Does he get Tessia or no? ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Awesome ff. Very OP MC. Ashborn personality is also very cool. He has the arrogance that comes from him being a Monarch. The comedy is hilarious especially when he is so overprotect/siscon that he send his whole army in the shadow of his sister. Also the author notes/comments are funny. He also has his own journey and does not just follow Arthur around. Thank you for the ff author. Hope for more chapters.
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A good novel of all sorts. Though some errors could be noticed in some parts (they barely even appear right now I think), everything is good. If I were to request something more in this novel, then faster updates! Yep, faster updates it is!
Reveal Spoiler
My two favourite novels joined together haha NICE!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks author-san! XD I MADE AN ACCOUNT JUST TO WRITE A REVIEW FOR THIS STORY! I have been reading this for two days and finally had time to finish! 🤓
Not bad, but the writing quality could have used some help. Wrong tenses, missing words, punctuation in the wrong spot or just missing. It felt like no one proof read this story before posting.
it was a fun read. it may not be a perfect story but it is a good story overall.
i'm still early into the book but this is honestly one of the greatest if not the greatest fan fic i've ever read . 2 OF MY FAVOURITE NOVEL MCS IN ONE BOOK AND DONE RIGHT . honestly PEAK‼️. i wish the author didnt drop it 😔
Hey, you forgot to put your story in "completed", you put "Completed" in the title, but not in the story so it won't appear next to the other completed stories.
Would it be possible to translate your novel into Thai? I will make sure to give credit and refrain from using it commercially. Please reply if you see it. ❤️
ADD THE LIGHT FRAGMENTS AND THE OTHER MONARCHS AND HAVE A WORLD BATTLE PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZzzzzzzzz!;!;$:$:$:!:!.$.$:!:!:$;$;$$:$:!.37
Esta buena esta novela, pero tambien si no has tenido ideas o ya te cansaste de escribir, no lo se, pero te quisiera dar esta idea. He visto que todos los fanfic de TBATE se centran mucho en personajes principales o secundarios, pero ¿Por que no hacer uno de haber nacido hermano?, de sylvie osea hermano gemelo de Sylvie pero que sea abandonado o que directamente el huyera de Arthur cuando tomo a sylvie
my favourite "beginning of the end" novelI love it reading it the third time and posting the review now 😞😞😞 forgot
Fantastic. It’s absolutely the best fan-fic I’ve ever read. I simply love it :)
This book was amazing I couldn’ put it down when I picked it up the develope was amazing the fights I felt my heart clench the ending was amazing it was what I was needing as everyone that is normal knows solo levelings ending left much to be desired this fufullied it thank you
I am not a novel reader soo i didnt know what the heck was going around in the later chapters..Still Great fanfic ------------------------------------------------------------------
At first I was hesitant because it wasn't a loser who reincarnated but a very serious character in my view.... I couldn't find any intresting fanfics so I just read few chapters... It was surprising good, it became one my favorites along with the other novel where we have Wanda and his brother as couples and mainlead
Thanks for writing this piece of art, it fully delivered the hype I expected from the crossover between Solo Leveling and The Beginning After The End. You didn't make some weird additions, it was just things from both stories merged in the purest forms possible. I loved it!
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> YOU ARE DEAD DEAD DEAD MUHAHAHAHAHAHA
My Best Friendo! ...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Epic................ ....... ................ ....... ................ ....... ................ ....... ................ ....... ................ ....... ................ ....... .....
bro why stop writing such a great FF you monster 😭. .. .. .. .. . . . . . . . . . . .. .. ,'*discuss the same thing to say that the same 43 🧚🏻♀️💫🥰💞 👁👄👁 👁👄👁 👁👄👁 You don't have this emoji😅⃤ But I do 💜⃤😂⃞:😅⃤😂⃞ with @FacemojiKeyboard You don't have this emoji😅⃤ But I do 💜⃤😂⃞:😅⃤😂⃞ with @FacemojiKeyboard You don't have this emoji😅⃤ But I do 💜⃤😂⃞:😅⃤😂⃞ with @FacemojiKeyboard
how did i not find this on wn when i searched solo leveling. absolute banger. arthur also gonna bang the elf girl ;) i need word count wn just let me post the review
Excellent chapters, I read each and every one of them [img=recommend] I wait for the next part, for now I wonder who will be the couple Ashborn.
i forgot to rate again but its super good ..................................................................ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo..................................................................
Im curious, will enjoy the novel without reading the original? ………………………,,…………………………………………………………………………………………………,,…………………………………………………………………………
It's a well-done ff the truth, you introduce systems of other verses into this one so that they can flow without damaging the story, but Ashborn you made him very apathetic, he's Human give him a little feelings and his power scale intervened too much in everything, he looks like a manhwa character haha But in general my criticism is towards the development of the character there is no love or anything of that are well the fights and everything but no mames leads a whole existence fighting, give it more romanticism.
I loved, you can read this fanfic while you wait for the chapters of the novel and I loved it a little less than the original but it's very good
Rights and the following the following information and other than that it has pictures for more than that you are the first to be able to make the same as well in this is the following the same thing you have a new window is
Does he get Tessia or no? ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Awesome ff. Very OP MC. Ashborn personality is also very cool. He has the arrogance that comes from him being a Monarch. The comedy is hilarious especially when he is so overprotect/siscon that he send his whole army in the shadow of his sister. Also the author notes/comments are funny. He also has his own journey and does not just follow Arthur around. Thank you for the ff author. Hope for more chapters.
Don't drop Don't drop Don't drop Don't drop Don't drop Don't drop Don't drop Don't drop Don't drop Don't drop Don't drop Don't drop Don't drop Don't drop
A good novel of all sorts. Though some errors could be noticed in some parts (they barely even appear right now I think), everything is good. If I were to request something more in this novel, then faster updates! Yep, faster updates it is!
Reveal Spoiler My two favourite novels joined together haha NICE!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks author-san! XD I MADE AN ACCOUNT JUST TO WRITE A REVIEW FOR THIS STORY! I have been reading this for two days and finally had time to finish! 🤓
Not bad, but the writing quality could have used some help. Wrong tenses, missing words, punctuation in the wrong spot or just missing. It felt like no one proof read this story before posting.